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Prearranged techniques

Fifteen classroom-ready moves, each with its purpose, step-by-step instructions, a short original example, and how it stretches across Australian Years 5–6 (scaffold), 7–8 (core) and 9–10 (extension). Filter by category, year level or the form you are teaching. AU years are the primary frame; any US/UK equivalence elsewhere on this site is a rough, unverified age equivalence, not a curriculum mapping. Project the matching explanatory slides first if the form itself is new.

Constraint

A rule that removes choices so the remaining choices matter.

Seven-word ceiling · about 15 minutes

Purpose: Force selection over accumulation: with only seven words, every word must earn its place and verbs do the heavy lifting.

  1. Draft freely for five minutes on the set theme — no counting yet.
  2. Read the draft and underline the seven strongest words, keeping at least one verb and one concrete noun.
  3. Write the poem using only those seven words, in an order that makes a small scene.
  4. Read it aloud. If a word is not pulling weight, swap it for the eighth underlined word and re-read.

Original example — after the storm

morning: the fence down,

sparrows arguing over one wet crust

Seven content words carry the whole scene; 'arguing' does the work three adjectives could not.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: Teacher sets the seven-word target and underlines with the class first.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Students underline their own seven and defend the verb choice to a partner.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Seven words, but no word may repeat a sound from the title; or write two rival seven-word versions and compare.

Pairs with: Blackout poem, Haiku sequence. Poems: The Swing, My Heart Leaps Up (The Rainbow) (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Ban your favourite words · about 20 minutes

Purpose: Break word habits. Banning a class's most-reached-for words (beautiful, amazing, suddenly, very) forces precise nouns and verbs instead.

  1. Brainstorm the class banned list together: five overused words go on the board.
  2. Draft the poem with none of them; when you reach for one, write the exact thing you actually mean.
  3. Swap drafts. Partners circle any smuggled banned word or vague stand-in.
  4. Restore one — only one — banned word if the poem truly needs it, and be ready to defend it.

Original example — instead of 'the sunset was beautiful'

the light went copper on the zinc roof,

and the magpies stopped mid-sentence

No 'beautiful': the colour, the material and the interrupted birdsong show it instead.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: Ban three words only, and provide a word bank of precise alternatives.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Ban five words; students keep a margin list of what they wrote instead.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Ban the five plus every abstract noun (joy, sadness, freedom) — feelings must arrive via objects.

Pairs with: Acrostic, Haiku sequence. Poems: My Heart Leaps Up (The Rainbow), I wandered lonely as a cloud (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Last word, first · about 20 minutes

Purpose: Generate surprising connections: each new line must begin with the last word of the line before it, chaining the poem forward.

  1. Write one strong opening line ending on a concrete noun.
  2. Begin the next line with that exact word — no synonyms allowed.
  3. Continue for six lines; when stuck, end a line on a word that opens doors (door, river, morning).
  4. In revision you may break the chain once, at the poem's turning point, and nowhere else.

Original example — chain (first four lines)

The kettle mutters to the cold window.

Window fogs; outside, the street goes silver.

Silver light on the letterbox, the gate,

gate still swinging from the postman's hurry.

Window → window, silver → silver, gate → gate: the chain pulls the eye across one morning scene.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: Four lines only, and the class chains the first two together on the board.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Six lines; one deliberate break allowed at the turn.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Eight lines where the final line must begin with the first line's last word, closing the loop.

Pairs with: Renga links, Acrostic. Poems: The Owl and the Pussy-cat (stanza I) (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Imagery

Making the reader see, hear and feel one exact thing.

Camera eye · about 20 minutes

Purpose: Cure explaining. The poem may only record what a camera and microphone could capture — no thoughts, no feelings, no conclusions.

  1. Choose a scene from this week, real or invented.
  2. List six things a camera would catch: objects, movements, light, sounds.
  3. Write the poem using only items from the list, in the order a viewer's eye would travel.
  4. Read it to a partner: they must name the feeling. If they cannot, add one more exact detail — not an explanation.

Original example — waiting

Two cups. One steams, one doesn't.

Her phone lights up, face-down.

Outside, his bus sighs past without stopping.

Nobody is named sad. The untouched cup and the missed bus do it.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: Provide the six-item list as a class from one projected scene.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Students build their own list and draft; partner names the feeling.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Two scenes intercut line-by-line, still camera-only, so the contrast creates the meaning.

Pairs with: Haiku sequence, Found poem. Poems: The Swing, Hope is the thing with feathers (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Sense swap · about 15 minutes

Purpose: Refresh tired description by deliberately crossing the senses: describe a sound as a colour, a taste as a texture, a smell as a movement.

  1. Pick the poem's central thing (a bell, rain, a kitchen at 6am).
  2. Write its obvious description first — then cross it out.
  3. Redescribe it through the 'wrong' sense: What colour is that sound? How does that smell move?
  4. Keep the crossed description only where it is more exact than the obvious one, not merely stranger.

Original example — the school bell

The bell pours its brass colour

over the yard, and we wade in.

Sound as colour and liquid: 'pours' and 'wade' make the familiar bell physical again.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: One sense swap per poem, modelled twice by the teacher first.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Two swaps, and students annotate which is more exact and why.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Build the poem's whole image system on one crossed sense and sustain it without breaking it.

Pairs with: Acrostic, Haiku sequence. Poems: The Tyger, A Spring Song (opening) (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Zoom in · about 15 minutes

Purpose: Move from the general to the particular in stages, so the poem lands on one small, exact, memorable detail.

  1. Write the widest shot first: the whole place in one line.
  2. Zoom once: one corner, one person, one object — one line.
  3. Zoom again: one detail of that object — a crack, a stitch, a sound it makes.
  4. End on the smallest detail. Cut any line that zooms back out.

Original example — three zooms

The oval, Saturday, smelling of cut grass.

Our bench, third row, paint worn to the wood.

One bootlace, double-knotted, trailing in the dust.

Stadium → bench → bootlace: the last tiny detail carries the whole afternoon.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: Three zooms with sentence starters for the widest line.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Four zooms; each line shorter than the one before.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Zoom in, then reverse the poem and test which direction is stronger; defend the choice.

Pairs with: Haiku sequence, Acrostic. Poems: The Swing, Loveliest of trees (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Sound

Working the poem's music: vowels, consonants, breath.

Vowel echo · about 20 minutes

Purpose: Give a poem a quiet music by repeating one vowel sound across a stanza, the way rhyme does without end-rhyme's sing-song.

  1. Choose one long vowel (the 'oo' of moon, or the 'a' of rain) that suits the mood.
  2. Draft the stanza, then hunt for words carrying that vowel and nudge two or three more in.
  3. Read aloud: the echo should be felt, not counted. If it sounds like a tongue-twister, thin it out.
  4. Mark the echoed words in the margin of the final copy.

Original example — 'oo' echo

June dusk, and the room goes blue;

a spoon cools in the soup, the moon up too soon.

June, room, blue, spoon, soup, moon, too, soon: the vowel hums without a single end-rhyme.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: Teacher supplies the vowel and a bank of echo words.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Students choose their own vowel and must justify the mood match.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Two stanzas, two different vowels, with the shift placed exactly at the poem's turn.

Pairs with: Haiku sequence, Renga links. Poems: Aedh Wishes for the Cloths of Heaven, Stars (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Consonant drum · about 20 minutes

Purpose: Use repeated consonants (alliteration and hard/soft consonant families) to set a poem's pace — drumming, hissing, or hushed.

  1. Decide the poem's pace first: march, creep, or drift.
  2. Pick the consonant family that fits (hard t/k/d for marching, s/sh for creeping, m/l for drifting).
  3. Draft, then strengthen two or three beats per line with that family — never every word.
  4. Read aloud at the intended pace; if you stumble, the drum is too loud.

Original example — hard consonants, marching

Boot, bucket, gate: the yard at six,

cold tap coughing, kettle ticking.

The t/k beats keep time like boots; 'coughing' and 'ticking' keep it human, not a jingle.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: One consonant family, teacher-chosen, with a word bank.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Students choose family and pace, and annotate the three strongest beats.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Shift consonant family mid-poem to mark a change of pace or mood, and defend the shift aloud.

Pairs with: Acrostic, Renga links. Poems: The Tyger, A Spring Song (opening) (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Breath marks · about 15 minutes

Purpose: Punctuate for the ear, not the grammar book: line breaks and punctuation are placed where a reader should breathe, hurry, or stop dead.

  1. Read the draft aloud and mark every place you naturally breathe with a slash.
  2. Compare those breaths with the current line breaks; move breaks to the breaths that matter.
  3. Use one full stop mid-line somewhere for a dead stop — save it for the most important moment.
  4. Partner reads it cold, aloud. Wherever they breathe 'wrong', the mark — not the reader — changes.

Original example — one dead stop

We ran the whole way home laughing,

past the shop, past the darkening oval. Then

the gate was locked. And the light was out.

The mid-line full stop after 'locked' makes the reader stop exactly where the runners did.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: Teacher reads; class raises hands at breaths and marks them together.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Students mark their own breaths and re-break their lines.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Deliberately place one misleading break, then revise it after a cold reading proves it misleads.

Pairs with: Found poem, Haiku sequence. Poems: I’m Nobody! Who are you?, Remember (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Structure

Ordering, turning and repeating so the shape carries meaning.

Ladder of moments · about 25 minutes

Purpose: Order separate moments so the sequence itself tells the story — no linking explanations, just the right order and the right gaps.

  1. Write three to five separate moments on slips of paper, one moment each.
  2. Order them chronologically first and read the sequence aloud.
  3. Try two other orders (end first; middle last). Read each aloud without explaining.
  4. Choose the order where the last moment changes how the first one feels. Glue that order down.

Original example — three moments, strongest order last-line-first tried and kept chronological

Morning: his boots by the door, still muddy.

Noon: the letter, read twice, left by the kettle.

Night: one boot moved to the mat. Just one.

No feelings named. The single moved boot does the whole emotional work because it comes last.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: Three moments, teacher supplies the slips for one shared scene.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Four moments; students must test and reject two orders in writing.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Five moments with one deliberate time jump; annotate what the gap makes the reader do.

Pairs with: Haiku sequence, Renga links. Poems: The Owl and the Pussy-cat (stanza I), The Song of Wandering Aengus (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Turn in the middle · about 20 minutes

Purpose: Give a short poem a hinge: halfway through, something turns — the scene, the speaker's mind, or the meaning of an earlier image.

  1. Draft the poem straight through, then find its exact middle line.
  2. Ask: what could turn here? (But — yet — until — then I saw…)
  3. Rewrite the second half so it answers, reverses or darkens the first half instead of just continuing it.
  4. Check the first half reads differently after the turn. If not, the turn is decoration — sharpen it.

Original example — the turn is 'until'

All morning the sea rehearsed its grey,

throwing the same wave at the same wall —

until the wave came back carrying

a red bucket, still warm from someone's hand.

Grey monotony turns on 'until': the returned bucket suddenly gives the sea a plot and a mystery.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: Provide three turn words on the board; students insert one at the middle.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Students locate their own middle and choose the turn type (scene, thought, or image).
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Two turns in one poem, or a turn in the final line only — and a paragraph defending the placement.

Pairs with: Haiku sequence, Acrostic. Poems: Ozymandias, My Heart Leaps Up (The Rainbow) (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Refrain with a difference · about 25 minutes

Purpose: Repeat one line through a poem but change a single word each time, so repetition itself shows change.

  1. Write a refrain line worth repeating — concrete, not a slogan.
  2. Draft three stanzas; the refrain closes each one.
  3. Each time it returns, change exactly one word to match what has shifted in the stanza.
  4. Read only the refrains in sequence: they should tell the poem's story in miniature.

Original example — three refrains

…and the river took the light.

…and the river kept the light.

…and the river gave back the light.

Took → kept → gave back: one verb changes and the whole relationship between speaker and river turns.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: Teacher supplies the refrain; class changes the word together first.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Students write their own refrain and plan the three word-changes before drafting.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Four returns where the final change breaks the pattern (different word class) for emphasis.

Pairs with: Renga links, Acrostic. Poems: The Raven, If— (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Revision

Second-pass moves that turn a draft into a poem.

Cut ten words · about 15 minutes

Purpose: The classic tightening pass: remove ten words without losing meaning, which exposes every lazy adjective, throat-clearing opener and repeated idea.

  1. Count the draft's words and write the target (total minus ten) at the top.
  2. First pass: cut intensifiers and fillers (very, really, just, suddenly, 'in the morning light' when the light is already shown).
  3. Second pass: merge lines that say the same thing twice; keep the sharper version.
  4. Read both versions aloud. Restore any cut whose absence you can actually hear.

Original example — before (18 words) → after (11 words)

Before: “Very early in the morning, the small brown dog was really happily running around in circles in the wet green grass.”

After: “Early, the small dog ran circles in the wet grass.”

Seven words cut here; 'happily' was already inside 'ran circles', and 'brown/green' added nothing the scene needed.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: Cut five words, with the filler list visible on the board.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Cut ten words and annotate the three hardest cuts.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Cut 20% of the poem's words, then write two sentences on what the cutting revealed about the draft.

Pairs with: Haiku sequence, Blackout poem, Found poem. Poems: My Heart Leaps Up (The Rainbow), I’m Nobody! Who are you? (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Verb upgrade · about 15 minutes

Purpose: Replace weak verb-plus-adverb pairs (walked slowly, said quietly) with single exact verbs (trudged, whispered) to sharpen action and cut clutter.

  1. Underline every verb in the draft; circle any verb carrying an adverb crutch.
  2. For each circled pair, brainstorm three single verbs that do both jobs.
  3. Choose the verb that also adds attitude (trudged is tired; strode is not).
  4. Read aloud: upgrade only where the new verb is truer, not just fancier — 'went' sometimes wins.

Original example — three upgrades

walked slowly → trudged

looked quickly → glanced

said angrily → snapped

Each upgrade also tells us how the person feels, so an explanation can be cut elsewhere.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: Class upgrades three shared sentences before touching their own drafts.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Students upgrade every circled pair and keep a margin note for the best one.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Upgrade, then deliberately downgrade one verb back — and defend why flat was better there.

Pairs with: Acrostic, Blackout poem. Poems: A Spring Song (opening), Ulysses (see the poem catalogue for sources).

Title last · about 10 minutes

Purpose: Write the title after the poem, so it adds a door into the poem instead of a label on it — drawn from the poem's world but saying something the lines do not.

  1. Finish and revise the poem with the title space left blank.
  2. List three candidate titles: one object from the poem, one moment just before it starts, one line that was cut.
  3. Test each: does it make a reader read the first line differently? Keep the one that does.
  4. Ban the obvious label (the spine word, 'My Haiku', the theme word) unless it passes the test.

Original example — title candidates for a poem about a grandfather's shed

Label (rejected): “Grandpa's Shed”

Object: “The Tin of Bent Nails”

Before it starts (kept): “What He Never Threw Away”

The kept title makes every object in the poem read as kept-on-purpose — it changes the first line without repeating it.

  • Years 5–6 — Scaffold: Choose from three teacher-supplied titles and justify the pick.
  • Years 7–8 — Core: Generate the three candidate types and test them on a partner.
  • Years 9–10 — Extension: Title a partner's poem blind; compare with the author's choice and defend the difference.

Pairs with: Found poem, Acrostic, Haiku sequence. Poems: Remember, The Swing (see the poem catalogue for sources).